User blog comment:Pookiefan/CP Pookie Series: Nightfall/@comment-86.160.30.216-20131027083454/@comment-5794637-20131028234400

It sounds more like you don't like my style of writing. I write where things do not make sense in the beginning, but the reader is gradually introduced to the characters, setting and plot. What I'm asking for a rating for is the quality of writing, not the plot line.