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Fluttergon wrote: January 15, 5:00 AM Live A Good Life Hotel

Suite 5

Night has fallen.

A dark figure steps out onto the balcony and looks over it.

Figure:  I sure wonder what all the buzz of these here heros is about. Maybe I should investigate.

The figure, having no arms or legs (boy I bet that gave away my character :P), grabs ''the bars of the balcony above him, which is Suite 5, and swings up onto the balcony. Inside, Omega X and Tails are sleeping, and the figure watches them for a bit, then reaches into it's pocket and takes out a note. It slips the note into the room, then swings back down onto it's own balcony and rushes inside.''

Figure:  I sure hope they don't take the note the wrong way.....

The figure jumps into it's bed and falls asleep.

Note says:

Hey heroes, I've heard a lot about you from the news. So, quick request, I know a little information about the death of Freezer. Meet me at the Black Pond in the Dark Forest and bring no one with you. I only want Omega X. If you bring anyone else, I will see them before you see me. And, I'll leave without telling you anything. Got it? Good. See ya there. Oh, the time. Midnight. Got it? Tomorrow. Good. I'm done now. See ya.

- 647372 OUTSIDE STORY

Omega X and Tails' Suite is Suite 5, not 1!

Suite 1 is for X, Zero and Ciel (who btw hasn't appeared in a long time)

Ad also, you're a bit late. We're already at January 15, but you wrote 13. I'll correct the mistake (and some typos I found) for you!

OUTSIDE ENDS

January 15, 5:00 AM

Live A Good Life Hotel

Suite 5

The note falls from Omega X's pocket due to the wind, and ends up on Suite 1's floor.

January 15, 10:48 AM

Live A Good Life Hotel

Suite 1

Ciel wakes up from her 1-week-repair sleep.

Ciel: Well, another day awaits... huh? A note?

Ciel reads the note and flies away to Suite 5.

January 15, 10:51 AM

Live A Good Life Hotel

Secret HQ

Ciel: Psst, Omega X! Wake up!

Omega X: Unnnh...

He wakes up.

Omega X: What time is-

Ciel: January 15, 10:51 AM.

Omega X: Oh no! I have to go investigate and gain evidence to proof Susan's innocence!

Ciel: What?

Omega X tells Ciel what happened.

Ciel: Oh, my...

Omega X: Why did you come, by the way?

Ciel: This was on the floor. Take it.

Note added to the files.

Omega X: Hmm... interesting...

Ciel: What do you think?

Omega X: I'm not sure. It could be a trap, but I think I know this handwriting... I'll go.

Ciel: But... it's at midnight!

Omega X: Right. Which is why I'll go investigate before midnight comes.

Ciel: And if midnight comes before you're over...?

Omega X: ...I'll make sure that doesn't happen.

Ciel: Might I go with you?

Omega X: He said that only I must go.

Ciel: I meant the investigation, you dummy!

Omega X: Oh, ok! I could sure use a hand!

Ciel: Great! Let's head out!

Omega X: But first, I have to get this...

Attorney's Badge added to the Files.

Omega X: ...and this...

Omega X got the Phone.

Omega X: ...and finally, this!

Omega X puts on his EPF Suit, and adds the Attorney's Badge to its left lapel!

Omega X: Good to go! Let's go to the Detention Center first.

Ciel: OK, but why?

Omega X: She's the defendant in this case, and all defense attorneys must interview with the defendant before anyhting else to know the defendant's version of the crime.

Ciel: OK!

January 15, 11:00 AM

Detention Center

Susan: M-mwister Omega!

Omega X: It's Omega X, but anyway...

Susan: Mwister Omega X, will woo welp mwe?

Omega X: Yes, Susan. I'll help you.

Susan: Waaaaayyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omega X: But first, I need to know what happened. And how did you get those many wounds, by the way?

Susan: Meanie beanie greenie did this to mwe with a wope!

Omega X: A rope? (Must be a whip... and by "meanie beanie greenie" she must mean Freezer...)

Susan: Wes! A painful wope!

Omega X: That's called a whip. So Freezer hit you with a whip?

Susan: Wes! Evewy night! Fdeezed appwoached mwe evewy night and wit me with a whip!

Omega X: Oh, my...

Ciel: Poor thing...

Omega X: Fine. So Freezer tortured you every night. But how did the explosion occur?

Susan: Well...

Susan: It happened while Fdeezed was witting mwe with the whip. A stwanger came in and did some weird things with something. Then, BOOOOM!! Big owange stuff evewywhere!

Omega X: (She must mean fire by that...) So, someone came in, huh... WHAT?! YOU MEAN THERE WAS SOMEONE ELSE IN THERE?!

Susan: Wes! Meanie greenie had bween bwinging people in bags!

Omega X: But no more bodies were found at the crime scene!

Susan: Weally? But mwe saw tem! The people meanie greenie had been bwinging!

Omega X: That means one of them might be the real culprit and, in that case, that he or she is still running loose!

Susan: Wight!

Ciel: Well, we heard all we needed to hear. Le's go to the crime scene.

Omega X: Yes. Bye, Susan!

Susan: MOOOOOO!!!!!! Pwease don't weave mwe were alone!!!!!!!!

Omega X: Don't worry, we'll be together tomorrow!

Ciel: Omega X...

Omega X: Yes?

Ciel: She seems pretty sad... can I keep her company until visiting hours are over?

Omega X: Sure, go on!

Susan: Way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omega X: Bye!

Ciel & Susan: Bye!

Omega X: (Well, here I go again...)

Omega X: (Investigating alone again... ...that's how it is for me...)

January 15, 11:25 AM

Freezer's HQ

Hostages' Room

Omega X: (This is how he heinous crime occurred... ...poor Freezer. Even if he kidnapped Susan and the Mayor, I still think he didn't deserve it.)

???: Hey, you! No entry without authorization!

Omega X shows his EPF Badge!

???: Oh! It's you! Long time no see!

Omega X: I'd know that voice anywhere... Toñoman!

Omega X: (This is Toñoman, my other friend from high school. He and I were great friends, and Freezer was part of the gang. He wished to become a detective since he was a child.)

Omega X: So, what are you doing here, Toñoman? I haven't seen you since the graduation party we had when we finished high school!

Toñoman: Well, I became a detective! And I couldn't contact you because I know nothing of your job...

Omega X: You fulfilled your dream! Congrats! And how'd you know it was me?

Toñoman: Oh, I just saw you clearly before you presented your badge, that's all!

???: Toñoman! What's up with all the racket?!

Toñoman: Oh, no! It's my boss!

???: Omega X?! Is that you?!

Omega X: No way! Shinestar?!

Omega X: (This is Shinestar, my friend since childhood. He wanted to be a police unit commander when he was older. And it seems that his wish was fulfilled!)

Shinestar: So you've fulfilled your dream job as well, huh, Omega X?

Omega X: Yeah... but this isn't the time to talk about old times. We have a crime to investigate!

Shinestar: Yes, the death of one of my greatest friends...

Omega X & Toñoman: You knew him???

Shinestar: Yes, since my childhood. He was at the same summer camp that I. We shared funny memories... and now we can't do it again anymore.

Toñoman: But we also knew him as well!

Omega X: Yeah, both Toñoman and I were in the same class as Freezer in high school.

Shinestar: Then this case is personal to all of us three...

Toñoman: By the way, I heard the defendant is just a pookie. Is this true, Omega X?

Omega X: Yes, it is.

Shinestar: Toñoman, did you find anything here?

Toñoman: Just some gunpowder, sir.

Omega X: Gunpowder?

FLASHBACK

Susan: It happened while Fdeezed was witting mwe with the whip. A stwanger came in and did some weird things with something. Then, BOOOOM!! Big owange stuff evewywhere!

FLASHBACK ENDS

Omega X: (Bombs are made with gunpowder... ...bombs explode... ...bombs cause fire after exploding...)

Omega X: Maybe... it could come from a bomb.

Toñoman & Shinestar: A- A BOMB?!

Gunpowder added to the Files.

Omega X: Look at this paper!

Shinestar: It's a thick but soft paper.

Omega X: A big part of it was burned... but look!

Shinestar: It has fingerprint and flipperprint data on it. And according to this, the last set of flipperprints are...

Toñoman: The defendant's flipperprints!

Omega X: Wow!

Fingerprint analysis added to the Files.

Omega X: Well, this is all we're going to get from this room. Let's go to another place.

Shinestar: Agreed. Let's head to the lab.

January 15, 11:59 AM

Freezer's HQ

Lab

Omega X: (Hmm... just as I expected from a secret lab... a high-tech mess... untidied tables... I like it and hate it at the same time.)

Omega X: So, what was here at the time of the explosion?

Shinestar: There was dangerous equipment here, but we took it all in.

Omega X: Think you guys could get me a report of everything that you took from here?

Shinestar: Sure! I'll look into that.

Omega X: Thanks.

Toñoman: Hey, look!

Shinestar: What's this? A marble?

Omega X: Actually, it's a .10 caliber bullet. It can only be used by very small guns, only given to elite spies like me.

Bullet added to the Files.

Toñoman: And this looks like a glove...

Glove added to the Files.

Shinestar: This room's empty.

Omega X: Well, you took EVERYTHING, so...

Toñoman: Right. So, Omega, you're the defense attorney at tomorrow's trial?

Omega X: It's good to hear you call me that again! And yes, I'll be the defense attorney tomorrow.

Shinestar: Good luck!

Toñoman: We'll be rooting for you!

Omega X: Thanks. By the way, have you got some witnesses yet?

Shinestar: Yeah, some people that say that Freezer took them hostages.

Omega X: (Hostages...?)

FLASHBACK

Omega X: (She must mean fire by that...) So, someone came in, huh... WHAT?! YOU MEAN THERE WAS SOMEONE ELSE IN THERE?!

Susan: Wes! Meanie greenie had bween bwinging people in bags!

Omega X: But no more bodies were found at the crime scene!

Susan: Weally? But mwe saw tem! The people meanie greenie had been bwinging!

FLASHBACK ENDS

Omega X: OK. That's what I needed to know.

Shinestar: I'll also be a witness.

Toñoman: And so will I!

Omega X: But, since you two've been investigating together, only one of you would need to go to the stand... right?

Shinestar: Normally, yes, but I've investigated rooms that Toñoman hasn't.

Toñoman: And I've investigated rooms that Shinestar hasn't!

Omega X: Oh, OK.

Shinestar: Time's up now. Bye, Omega!

Toñoman: Bye, Omega! It was good to see you again!

Omega X: Same to you both! Bye!

Omega X: (Well, now that the investigation has been done, I need to visit Susan once more...)

Omega X: (...and then go to the Black Pond in the Dark Forest to gain info on Freezer's death.)

January 15, 12:34 PM

Detention Center

Susan: MWISTER OMEGA X!!!

Ciel: Good to see you, Omega X!

Omega X: Same!

Ciel: What did you find out?

Omega X tells Susan and Ciel everything he discovered.

Ciel: Incredible... Susan's fingerprints were actually recorded?

Omega X: Yes. I have what's left of the analysis.

Ciel: Well, I also have some good news.

Omega X: Really?

Ciel: Yes! An agent called Shinestar allowed me to stay with Susan until she gets an acquittal!

Omega X: Great!

Omega X: (Thanks, Shinestar... You've really helped us with this.)

Ciel: So, you're leaving, right?

Omega X: Yes. Twelve hours 'till rush hour. Got to get ready! Bye!

Ciel & Susan: Bye!

Omega X: (This is it... ...tomorrow's the day!)

Omega X: (Tomorrow, at midnight, I'm going to meet up with that mysterious man that left the note on Ciel's Suite!)

Omega X: (Depending on what he tells me...)

Omega X: (...I might be able to find the real culprit!)

January 16, 0:00 AM

Dark Forest

Black Pond

Omega X: I'm here! Show yourself!

Mysterious figure shows up!

???: So you came after all...

Omega X: I knew it was you... Rayman.

Rayman: How'd you know?!

Omega X: The security camera recorded someone that, although he had no arms or legs, had hands and feet. And did you just lose a glove?

Rayman: Yes! Do you have it?

Omega X: (I do, but it's evidence... I can't give it to him just yet.) No, I don't.

Rayman: Oh, a shame.

Omega X: So, what's that information you said you have?

Rayman: Oh, yeah. It's actually that...

Rayman: ...one of the hostages is the real killer. And it's an unexpected one.

Omega X: Who is it?!

Rayman: I can only say that it's not the defendant.

Omega X: But then, who did it?! Who?!

Rayman: I can tell you no more. Fare thee well...

Omega X: (Well, this is it.)

Omega X: (The final battle to decide Susan's fate... ...will begin today at sunrise.)

Omega X: (This is a trial I cannot lose... ...that I must not lose!!)

''Omega X found some crucial information involving the real killer, but just who is it? What will happen to Susan? And where will the rest of the team be when the trial is in session? Don't miss it! To be continued...''

OUTSIDE STORY

I'll control the characters in the trial, ok?! I mean the defense, the prosecution, the judge, the witnesses and their testimonies, etc.

OUTSIDE ENDS