User blog comment:XxObjectShows4LifexX/How To Roleplay - How To Be Innocent/@comment-27053389-20160315140917

I think this applies to the post, but here's my tip.

Say you're a poor pookie in a pookie contest, and a rich and fancy missy comes in. Then, you give her a blue limo.

Okay, that just makes no sense. Like, you said you were poor and abandoned, then out of the blue you have enough money to buy her a limo?! Wow, how logical is that?