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Omegasonic2000 wrote: Fluttergon wrote: March 6, 12:00 AMLive A Good Life Hotel

Outside Pool

''Rayman is sitting with by the poolside with Yoshi. Rayman is studying another law book and Yoshi is watching over his shoulder. Rayman sighs and chucks the book into the pool.''

Yoshi:  YOYO YO YOSHI YOSHI YOOYOO!! (HEY I WAS READING THAT!!)

Rayman:  What, you wanna become an attorney too?

Yoshi:  Yosh. (Yeah.)

Rayman:  No, you don't. It's much harder than it seems.

Yoshi:  Yoyo yoo yoshi yooshi! (I could put up with it!)

Rayman:  But would you want to get up early every morning and have to go to a court house?

Yoshi:  Yo, yoshi yoshi.... (No, not really....)

Yoshi:  Yoshi yoyo yoyoyoyo yooshi! (But I'm sure it'd be fun for me!)

Rayman:  Yoshi, seriously now, think about this. Do you really wanna be an attorney?

Yoshi thinks for a bit.

Yoshi:  Yoyo. (Yes.)

Rayman:  Why?

Yoshi:  YOyoyoyoyoyoYO! YOSHI!! Yoosh yooshi yoyoyoyoyoyo! Yoyo! (BECAUSE!!  HERO!!  I wanna be a hero!  I wanna save people and fight crimes and stuff!)

Rayman:  But being an attorney means using the law and trying to sort out who is guilty in a crime and who is innocent. You have to use your head. A lot. You have to put together the available evidence and use it to, like I said, figure out who the culprit is. Are you sure you wanna deal with all that?

Yoshi:  Yoshi yo. (I'm sure.)

Rayman:  Alright, I'll ask Omega X tomorrow if you can train with me. How's that sound? Then you and me can be attorney partners.

Yoshi:  YO-YO!! (YAY!!)

Rayman:  But first, though, you'll need this.

''Rayman puts a Yoshi translator collar around Yoshi's neck and snaps it shut. He turns it on.''

Rayman:  This will help people understand what you're saying. Now, when you speak in Yoshi language, it will translate it into English for everyone else. Cool right?

Yoshi:  Yeah! Hey, it works!

Rayman:  Of course it works! Tails said he made it especially for you when he got bored! He said he was brainstorming ideas and he came up with that translator for you, considering only I can understand you and it's hard to translate for everyone else.

Yoshi:  The next time I see him, I gotta tell him thanks!

Rayman:  Yeah! I think it's time to go to bed now.

Yoshi:  Okay, can I get the book out of the pool? We can ask Zero to restore it to its original form, before it got wet.

Rayman:  Good idea! I'll meet you in the room!

''Yoshi hurries in the pool and dives underwater and grabs the book, then swims back up to the surface and climbs out. He follows Rayman back into the hotel.''

March 6, 2:30 AM

Live A Good Life Hotel

Suite 13 (I think that's Rayman and Yoshi's suite, am I right?)

''Rayman is in his bed and is dreaming. He is sitting at a desk in an attorney's office, and is stressing over many papers that need to be turned in.''

''Rayman:  Argh! I hate deadlines! It's like I will be dead if I don't turn all this stuff in on time! Where's that contract that needs to be signed? I HAD IT RIGHT HERE! WHERE DID IT GO!?''

''He turns around and sees a stick figure standing there. It's a troll face.''

''Rayman:  What the? Where have I seen that before? Oh yeah, memes. Argh, no time for that now!''

Rayman is randomly transported into his world's jungle.

The troll face is holding the contract that Rayman needs to sign.

Rayman:  Hey, give that back!

He tries to reach for it, but the troll face rips it up into tiny pieces before Rayman can grab it.

''Troll Face:  Hey, if you didn't sign that contract, then you would lose your job and all your money. You got a problem?''

''Rayman:  I needed that paper!! It's ALL YOUR FAULT! Yoshi, guys, what am I going to do now? Guys?''

Rayman notices he is now all alone, and in complete darkness.

??:  Go to sleep.

Rayman:  Huh?

He turns around.

JEFF THE KILLER IS THERE.

Rayman:  Who you?

Jeff:  GO TO SLEEP.

Jeff lunges at Rayman, holding his knife.

Rayman:  (This is all because I didn't sign that contract in time!)  WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!

Rayman instantly wakes up in his bed!

March 6, 8:45 AM

Live A Good Life Hotel

Suite 13 (Still not sure if it is Rayman and Yoshi's suite or not.)

Rayman:  WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!

Yoshi snaps awake at Rayman's screaming and crying!

Yoshi:  What's the big deal? Some of us are trying to sleep!

Rayman:  YOSHI I HAD THIS TERRIBLE DREAM THAT I WAS IN AN ATTORNEY OFFICE AND I HAD A DEADLINE AND ALL THESE PAPERS NEEDED TO BE SIGNED AND I NEEDED TO SIGN A SPECIFIC CONTRACT TO KEEP MY JOB BUT THERE WAS THIS RANDOM MEME TROLL FACE AND IT HAD THE CONTRACT AND IT RIPPED THE CONTRACT UP INTO LITTLE TINY PIECES AND I LOST MY JOB AND SUDDENLY I WAS IN COMPELTE DARKNESS AND JEFF THE KILLER CAME AND TOLD ME TO GO TO SLEEP AND THEN HE LUNGED AT ME WITH HIS KNIFE AND ALMOST STABBED ME BUT LUCKILY I WOKE UP IN TIME!!!!!!

Yoshi:  Woah, calm down. It's just a dream. I had a more terrible dream than that once.

Rayman:  What was it?

Yoshi:  My newly bought bananas turned rotten.

Rayman:  ....

Yoshi:  I KNOW RIGHT! It's so horrid....

Rayman:  (I'm sure it was, for a fruit lover.)  Anyways, let's go to Zero's suite and have him restore my textbook, then we can go and ask Omega X if you can train with me to become and attorney. Then we can go and eat breakfast.

Yoshi:  Okay! Let's go!

They start towards Zero's suite.

Rayman:  (That dream I had....)

Rayman:  (What could it mean?)

Rayman:  (Could it mean that a drastic disaster will occur and I'll lose my job?  Or, at a trial, will someone accuse me of a specific crime and make it seem real, so real, in fact, that I'll lose my job?  I wouldn't want that to happen.  After all, I've never committed any crimes.  I have no criminal record.)

Rayman:  (But that dream, it had to have something to do with my job.  And I don't know what, but I may soon find out, and I may soon find out in a bad way, too.)

'What could Rayman's dream mean? Does it have something to do with him losing his job? Or will Omega X fire Rayman for something completely random? Will Omega X accept Yoshi as an attorney trainee, and if Rayman may get fired, will Yoshi replace him? No one knows what the dream means yet; it could mean so many things. But WHAT, WHAT, exactly, does it mean? Don't miss it!'

Outside.

LOL I TRIED REALLY HARD AT THE ENDING TO MAKE IT SOUND LIKE ONE OF YOUR ENDINGS, OMEGA LOL!!

Outside ends. OUTSIDE

The ending is cool, but remove the bold at the ending. Also, you must add "To be continued..." in italic. Also, Suite 13 is Omega X and Blacksaber's Suite. And they're still at the trial btw.

OUTSIDE ENDS

OUTSIDE ENDS Thanks. I basically read your posts and then try to somehow copy the style at the ending. And sorry about the suites. I can't keep track of them! Which one is Rayman and Yoshi's?