Board Thread:Family Roleplay/@comment-24986785-20140510111614/@comment-11084328-20140510205936

69.141.219.43 wrote: Mabel: Hmm..*goes to place*


 * afer going there..

Mabel: Hmm....

A volcano erupts behind her, giving her AWESOME powers

1 MINUTE later...

Mabel?: *wakes up* What happened? *relizes what happened* I have became.. A GUARDIAN!! I shall go by Mokushiroku! OUTSIDE

Kind of rushed up, don't you think? The note isn't even shown, we don't get to see anything about her house/surroundings, etc.

OUTSIDE ENDS

Fire Spider: Mokushiroku? Weird name. Weird, but nice.

Mokushiroku turns around and finds a hedgehog with a symbol on his forehead!

Mokushiroku: AHH! Who are you?

Fire Spider: I am Fire Spider, the Leader of the Guardians and the Guardian of Fire. A pleasure.

Mokushiroku: A pleasure! Hey, wait a second... Fire?!

Fire Spider: Yes, and you're the Guardian of Lava.

Mokushiroku: OK...

Fire Spider: Wait! Why don't you have a symbol yet?! Let me help!

Fire Spider uses his fire powers to give Mokushiroku a symbol shaped as a volcano!

Fire Spider: Alright! There you go!

Mokushiroku: Sweet!

Fire Spider: Our tent is there. You'll find your bed instantly.

Mokushiroku: OK.

Both of them leave to the tent.