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69.141.219.43 wrote: kk. BTW I finally found who i am being

Ahuizotl

Midgardsorm

??? (i'll tell you more about her soon)

in The next chapter, Midgardsorm and the creeper will make their first appearence. The crime that Midgard solves is: A robber stole a very important gem and gave it to ??? .

In the chapter after that, ??? will appear more, the enderman will too. You will learn ???'s true idenity. The crime: Serail killer on the loose.

The chapter after the previous chapter: Ahuizotl strikes back in various attacks. ??? appears and kidnapps Susan. They do not get Susan back until the next chapter. No trail yet.

The other chapter: ??? almost kills Susan. Ahuizotl tries to kill Sonic. Omega X tries to save Susan, but he is put with a task: let ??? Kill Susan, or make a sacrifice to free Susan. OUTSIDE

My plan actually was:

Next chapter: (I'm OK with the one you said)

Chapter after the next chapter: A Big Bang Bomb has resetted the world and created a new one where an evil mastermind rules, but who is to blame? Rayman and Yoshi will have to defend the world's king if they hope to find the truth!

OUTSIDE ENDS

March 11, 10:05 AM

Defendant's lobby No. 5

Omega X: A third party on the scene... Nice move there, guys.

Rayman: Thanks, boss.

Omega X: And I have to reveal one thing... This trial... is my last trial as an attorney.

Rayman & Yoshi: WHAT?!

Omega X: I've been on this too much, and I need to retire, but I want to leave a legacy as well. You two are that legacy. I've already signed the paper in which I give you full control of my law office.

Rayman: But, boss...

Omega X: Enough. We have to return to the courtroom. And remember: "A lawyer always smiles even in the worst of times".

Rayman & Yoshi: YES!

March 11, 10:25 AM

Courtroom No. 5

Judge: Court will now reconvene. Prosecutor Blackquill, is the witness, John, ready?

Blackquill: Yes, Your Honor. I now proceed to call him.

John enters the courtroom.

John: I see I'm called to testify, huh?

Judge: Mr. John, name and occupation, please.

John: John Smith, employee at New Lines Corp, AKA the crime scene.

Judge: I see. Please testify about what you saw, please.

Witness' Testimony: What I Saw

John's Statement 1: So, I went in at 3:00 AM.

John's Statement 2: I had to make a call to a friend and grabs some papers, and since I have no cell phone I went to the building and used the phone there.

John's Statement 3: I heard a subtle noise coming from the anomalies alarm, and I checked it.

John's Statement 4: It came from Floor 800, so I took the elevator there.

John's Statement 5: When I arrived, the victim was dead on top of a pile of things!

John's Statement 6: I rushed down to the Main Floor and used the phone there, and then Blacksaber arrived.

Witness' Testimony ends

Judge: Thank you really much. Mr. Rayman, your cross-examination, please.

Cross-Examination: What I Saw

John's Statement 1: So, I went in at 3:00 AM.

Rayman presents: Blacksaber's Testimony



Rayman: OBJECTION!

Rayman: You say you've entered at 3:00, but is that true at all?

John: Cut to the point.

Rayman: Blacksaber said he saw you on the phone calling the police. However...

OUTSIDE

Play this music to make it more epic.

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Rayman: ...he entered at 3:00 AM!

John: WHAT?!

Rayman: He claims that he saw you calling the police, but for that you had to have entered before 3:00 AM!

John: URK!

Judge: Mr. Rayman, please explain.

Rayman: I think this witness is strictly related to the crime.

Blackquill: Enough of this! If you're so sure...

Blackquill: ...then present evidence that proves he entered before 3:00 AM!

Rayman presents: Security Camera Recordings

Rayman: TAKE THAT!

Rayman: This videos.

John: Huh?

Rayman: The witness appears in them, however...

Rayman: ...he appears in the 800 Floor at 2:40 AM, the time of the murder!

Judge: WHAT?!

John: IMPOSSIBLE!!

Rayman: Unfortunately, he's not shown directly commiting the murder...

Rayman: ...but this piece of evidence clearly indicts him as the real killer!

Rayman presents: Blackout Report

Rayman: TAKE THAT!

Rayman: From 2:40 to 2:49, there was a blackout on Floor 800. We discovered it was intentional.

Blackquill: So what?

Rayman: The 800th Floor's lights can only be controlled from that floor itself. Whoever caused the blackout did it on purpose!

John: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

John: You think you're smart, huh, Mr. Lawyer?! You think you can pin it down on me, huh?!

Rayman: ...

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You can stop the music if you were playing it.

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John: (snif) Fine, I'll admit. (sob)

Rayman: Please do it at the police station.

The officers take John Smith to the Detention Center.

Judge: This is sure what I call a busy trial. But therefore, I declare the defendant...

NOT GUILTY

Judge: Court is adjourned!

The judge slams with his gavel.

March 11, 10:40 AM

Defendant's Lobby No. 5

Omega X: Congratulations, boys.

Rayman: Thanks, boss. But, you're retiring...

Omega X: Yeah. But I'm not leaving. I'll assist to your trials.

Rayman & Yoshi: YEAH!!

Omega X: For now, let's go to our Suites. Who wants Ice Cream?

Rayman & Yoshi: I do, I do!

Chapter 5: Turnabout for Rookies

THE END

Next Chapter's Sneak Peek:

???1: That pesky light blue hedgehog, Omega X... He lives here.

???2: So what?

???1: When I died, he did nothing to prevent it, and now... (pulls out sword) (enters Omega X's Suite) it's payback time. (raises sword over Omega X's head)

To be continued in ''Chapter 6: A Creepy Turnabout! Don't miss it!''

OUTSIDE

Phew! Finally done!

OUTSIDE ENDS