Thread:C H U N K Y/@comment-25477899-20150926004154/@comment-24170167-20151008233851

The Jonie wrote: I think it is time. I've been thinking about this for over a month. Can I be a Admin. I've been here for almost a year, and I think I deserve it. . *walks into classroom* Welcome to Convincing 101! In this class you will learn how to convince people to do things! I am your teacher, Miss Pookieluv. Today we will be using an example of a young man who asked his wiki's founder for adminship. Here we go.

This mans first problem was the first sentance. The founder does not know what he means by "I think it is time." The man should have taken this out completely. The second sentance is okay. However, there are MAJOR grammatical issues with the third. First of all, it's "an" not "a". Secondly, admin is not capitalized. And finally, a question mark is needed. Without a question mark, it sounds like you are demanding things.

Next sentence: "I've been here for over a year". First of all, why does the founder need to know this? And secondly, a year really isn't that much.

This young mans last mistake was not telling the founder WHY he deserved it. All he said was "I think I deserve it," but he didn't say why.

Well, I think that's it for today. See you all next week!