Board Thread:Non-related Discussion/@comment-24405971-20131208175026/@comment-11084328-20140306164131

Fluttergon wrote: Well, that's definitely what you are doing. And I'm not being sarcastic. OUTSIDE

Thanks! Well, let's get on with the story.

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March 6, 10:24 AM

Live A Good Life Hotel

Suite 14

''Rayman is teaching Yoshi the basics of being an attorney, such as how to call the Judge in a trial, the arm's angle when shouting "OBJECTION!", the voice tone when saying "HOLD IT!" and the way to slam the podium when presenting evidence or pressing witnesses.''

Rayman: (Whew! A whole hour of classes... we'll stop now.) OK! Class isover for now, Yoshi!

Yoshi: OK!

Rayman: Let's go to the Hotel's Living Room to watch TV and eat some snacks!

Yoshi: YAY!

March 6, 10:25 AM

Live A Good Life Hotel

Living Room

''While Rayman and Yoshi arrive, Luna and Susan are there! Susan's watching a football match (it turns out she loves football) while Luna is reading the Club Penguin newspaper!''

Rayman: Reading the Club Penguin newspaper even from far away?

Luna: Yeah! And look at this! It says that a new Spa was opened! Cool! I wanna go!

Rayman: You mean, like the one infront of the hotel?

Luna (FINALLY!) notices the giant Spa in front of the hotel!

Luna: Woo hoo!

Luna asks Susan if she wants to go to the Spa!

Susan: MO! Mwe want to watch twhis match! Way for fwootball!

Luna rushes to the Spa alone and relaxes!

March 6, 10:50

Live A Good Life Hotel

Spa

Luna: (Wow... I'm so relaxed I don't even know where I'm headed...)

Luna, sleepwalking, accidenatlly enters a staff-only door that was open!

Luna: (W-what's this...? T... this isn't the exit...)

Luna hits the door with her shoulder and accidentally closes it, and she's stuck inside since she has no key!

Luna suddenly wakes up!

Luna: WHOWHATWHENWHEREWHY?! Huh?!

Luna remembers that she entered a staff-only door and that she sealed herself in!

Luna: Oh, no! What am I gonna do?

Luna rests on a wall and touches a hidden switch!

An elevator is revealed!

Luna: This must be the EPF HQ for Penguin CIty... Well, in we go!

Luna enters the elevator, but suddenly notices that it's not from the EPF!

The elevator stops and Luna finds herself in some kind of secret base!

She exits the elevator and hears a voice!

???1: ... And that's why I'd like to investigate this case.

???2: OK, Agent Omega X. The case is in your hands.

Omega X: Thank you, sir.

Luna: (Omega X?! What's he doing here?!)

Luna tries to leave in the elevator but trips!

Omega X hears her but doesn't know it's her!

Omega X: A spy?! I'll catch it!

Omega X reaches Luna!

Omega X: Luna?!

Luna: Yeah, it's me. And before you asked, I entered here because...

Luna explains Omega X what happened.

Omega X: Hmm... I see.

Luna: And what's this place, anyway?

Omega X: This is confidential info. Promise me that you won't tell anyone.

Luna: I promise.

Omega X: This is Penguin City's base for the Supreme Penguin Agency, or SPA. It's even better than the EPF. And it has better tech.

Luna: I... notice.

Omega X: There're a few agents, such as...

Two agents show up!

Omega X: ... Agent Unknown...

Agent Unknown: What's up?

Omega X: ... and Agent M.A., which supposedly means Midnight Alpha.

Agent M.A.: Hey there!

Omega X: Together, we've accomplished quite some missions. Would you like to join? You've showed some courage to even try to come here. Didn't you notice the "CLOSED FOR REPAIRS" sign on the front door?

Luna: ... (feels awkward)

Luna: ... Yes. I want to join.

Omega X: Excellent. Here's your stuff.

Ultimate Phone added to the Court Record.

SPA Badge added to the Court Record.

Luna: I need to name a Private Assistant? ANd what's that?

Omega X: A Private Assistant is a customizable program that helps you. You can name it, give it a birthday, put some clothes on it...

Luna: Cool! I want to name mine... Susan!

Omega X: I'm not sure. The readers will be confused when they read two different Susan names!

Luna: You're right... How about Chocolate?

Omega X: That's something the readers'll certainly like! Chocolate it is!

Luna: OK! I'll leave now!

''Luna has joined the agency known as SPA, but will she be able to help Omega X investigate his case? Don't miss it! To be continued...''

Luna comes out of the spa.

She looks at the door.

Luna: (So it DID say "CLOSED FOR REPAIRS"...)

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I'll only add these things post-ending when a character realizes a fact that he/she hadn't realized in the story.

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