Thread:Eartheditor9cp/@comment-24813457-20140716193434/@comment-24352677-20140717035855

Sure ^.^ I'm also making a horror sad story. Its gonna be about this girl whos parents die, and she runs away from the orphanage. She has these weird scars. These guys are chasing her, and they catch her and tell her to give them as secret she doesn't know about. They then go on to torture her. Ayer that they finally understand she doesn't know. They drop her, but then she gets really mad at herself for letting herself be tortured, and she becomes a really strong woman. She finds an Ally, a guy who also lost his parents. They eventually get a really strong connection and they start to get feelings for each other, but they never have time to admit it. Soon Esme (the main character girl) finds out Ray (the guy) gets kidnapped. She then sets out to find him. She tells the kidnappers that she'll give her own life to spare his. The torturers just laugh, and say she's a weak woman and she can't do anything to men. Then she starts to fight really cool. Like there's an epic fight scene. She saves Ray, and they kiss O.o. Ok while they're making out the torturers come up. And they both fight. They get away. Ok so Ray and Esme get together have kids ?0(there's no marriage in that world. There's just this thing where you both have to promise and give another blah blah blah) and they have 2 kids. Eventually Ray has to go to war, and not Esme because the leaders of that world thought that women could not fight. On the battlefield a bomb is dropped on Ray and he dies. The war slowly moves to the area Esme an her kids are, and they have to move to the shelter. Esme griefs over Rays death, but her five year old children don't know what happened. Her children get his sickness in the shelter, and they die too. Esme lost everyone she loved. She attempted to kill herself, but she never succeeded. We tried again and again. Then the torturers came and kidnapped her.she could have easily foght back, but she didn't. They told her hey knew she had a secret. She still didn't know the secret. But she said the could kill her and they wold never find the secret. She shrieked and yelled at them. While they tortured her she didn't scream in pain. She let them. They killed her, the end,