Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-24037865-20141015141851/@comment-11084328-20141116141527

The Symphonic Taco wrote: OUT

Lemme re-write the scene...

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Fire Spider II

I ran over to the surviving Guardians.

"Guys! And gals. You OK?" I asked.

"What?" Skye replied, slightly loudly.

"Umm, I said if you're all OK."

Skye cocked her head to the side. "I can't hear you!"

"We're okay," Artemisae sighed.

"But the rest..." Peace pointed to the explosion site miles away.

"Oh, no..." I said, kneeling down by pure lack of strength.

OUT

The reason I rewrote that scene was because, Skye is now deaf due to the explosion. I'll be writing the epilogue soon.

OUT OUTSIDE

Those details need to be mentioned!

OUTSIDE ENDS